100WC Jamie (Y.7 #IPACA) - CLICK HERE TO COMMENT

It's Christmas Day at 3.34am in my house with my Mum and my Dad I was downstairs to see Santa.  A present flew down the chimney  I was so happy to see a black box. It was a big square box with a pink bow.  

3 comments:

  1. Mr. Spracklen7 December 2012 at 04:41

    Jamie,

    You had lots of great ideas in the session today, well done.

    I would love to know what happens next in your 100WC. Maybe you could finish this at home?

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  2. Anonymous7 December 2012 at 06:33

    I like the fact that you are precise with the time,typical child up very early.Your mum and dad nust be lovely.I would like to read the rest of the story though.

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  3. Anonymous11 January 2013 at 10:52

    Really good detatil that draws the reader in. I wonder would you be more interested in the black box or where and who it came from in that moment? MD

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