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I couldn't believe my eyes this had never happened before, my eyes were jumping at what I was seeing. Mum had never been away from us before, this was going to be a new start for us all. We left the court room and started the journey home, Zoe was still crying and holding that little bear she always has.

This post was written collaboratively by a Year 7 intervention group at IPACA. 

2 comments:

  1. Mrs Fryer11 January 2013 at 02:49

    Love the ideas. Very engaging. You may want to look at the punctuation, becasue it took me a couple of times to work out where the pauses should be.

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  2. Miss S Chapman13 January 2013 at 01:18

    This is great writing. When can we find out what happened in the court room? You have me hook, line and sinker.

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